Thursday, March 6, 2014

Complain about Her or Leisure Time?

55 on Friday #WriteTribe


Of course, even after decade of marriage and two kids

His heart melts at her glimpse in leisure time

His heart skips a beat with her laugh in leisure time

He easily gets lost in her gleaming eyes in leisure time

Unfortunately, leisure time is no near them for years

Who should he complain about?



Linking it to Write Tribe Festival of Words: 55 Fiction

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11 comments:

  1. Awww...just so sad end to a wonderful beginning.

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  2. Sadly, that's the story of most couples! :|

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  3. This the truth of life.Well written.

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  4. But they are making memories for life :)

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  5. The harsh truth of life, Unfortunately.

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  6. Oh, after marriage,I'd imagine that he'd have many people to complain about.

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  7. aww that's sad.. there should always be time for each other!

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  8. :( :( Who would she be complaining to ???

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  9. :( :( Who would she be complaining to ???

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  10. First love is always difficult to forget, isn't it?

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