Thursday, March 6, 2014

Complain about Her or Leisure Time?

55 on Friday #WriteTribe


Of course, even after decade of marriage and two kids

His heart melts at her glimpse in leisure time

His heart skips a beat with her laugh in leisure time

He easily gets lost in her gleaming eyes in leisure time

Unfortunately, leisure time is no near them for years

Who should he complain about?



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11 comments:

  1. sugandhaMarch 6, 2014 at 10:34 PM

    Awww...just so sad end to a wonderful beginning.

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  2. Shilpa GargMarch 6, 2014 at 10:54 PM

    Sadly, that's the story of most couples! :|

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  3. UnknownMarch 7, 2014 at 12:04 AM

    This the truth of life.Well written.

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  4. Mina MenonMarch 7, 2014 at 2:35 AM

    But they are making memories for life :)

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  5. KParthasarathiMarch 7, 2014 at 2:58 AM

    Made for sad reading

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  6. kalpana solsiMarch 7, 2014 at 3:32 AM

    The harsh truth of life, Unfortunately.

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  7. Michelle LiewMarch 7, 2014 at 5:19 AM

    Oh, after marriage,I'd imagine that he'd have many people to complain about.

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  8. AnonymousMarch 7, 2014 at 5:44 AM

    aww that's sad.. there should always be time for each other!

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  9. Jyotsna BhatiaMarch 7, 2014 at 10:48 AM

    :( :( Who would she be complaining to ???

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  10. Jyotsna BhatiaMarch 7, 2014 at 10:49 AM

    :( :( Who would she be complaining to ???

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  11. AnonymousMarch 8, 2014 at 3:45 AM

    First love is always difficult to forget, isn't it?

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